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Joshua Lavender's avatar

Re: “I wanted to lock them in a room and force them to just talk to each other.”

For me, this is a mark against a story. If there’s a good reason for the characters to be evasive or secretive, that’s one thing. But without it, the conflict looks manufactured, and characters look emotionally stunted — and not, usually, in ways the author is fruitfully dissecting. I don’t much care to read about them.

A pity. A lesbian Gatsby, solidly done, would be right up one of my literary alleys.

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Jodi Rose Crump's avatar

Thank you for this review! It sounds like an interesting book!!

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